Can You Hear? Can You Feel? Poem by Kasia Fedyk
Can You Hear? Can You Feel?
I held my tears
in my palms
I saw the light as they
swam from my skin
and dropped down
unto the ground
Have you heard
what they said
a story they told
of an old man
with a broken heart
and a halo above his head
he walked endlessly just to find
the peace within
have you seen him
have you felt his pain
with his heart so pure
still trembling, shaking
resembling an earthquake
what will he find?
Like the wind upon
the valleys
swaying to bring new air
a new life
to the old
What is old
there is no age
to your soul
or is there?
do you know who you are mam... every beautiful thing that can be think that is what you are incredible poem......... love you, payal
Had everyone been feeling everything, there would not have been special persons in life.There won`t have been words like unique as is this poem...great write
A great rhetorical question at the end. Who knows? A powerful imagination and emotion in the first stanza. Like it.
Wish I knew the answer to the last verse Kasia, a really thoughtful touching poem,
Can you hear? Can you feel? very beautiful.. touching.. read my poem Can you not see?
Beautiful write Kasia, ending with a thought-provoking question.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 6:08:18 AM # 1.0.0.1119
So nice poem. A great mind thinks great. Very profound and philosophical subject-matter, Kasia.