Can'T Sleep Poem by Keli Mims

Can'T Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Oh I can't sleep,
Oh I can't breathe.
I feel diffrent,
I feel like me.
Boy this is starnge,
But it feels alright.
There's no way,
I'm sleeping tonight.
This feeling,
Is taking control.
It starts here,
in my soul.
I can't see it,
But oh the feel.
No anger,
No rage no fear.
I can't keep,
My eyes from you.
I'm not sure,
What to do.
It's like it's,
Just you and me.
Oh I can't sleep,
I can't breathe.
Nothing else to do,
But look at you.
Because here,
I have nothing to prove.
It's like a language,
I don't understand.
Like the feeling when,
You touch my hand.
I'm waiting to be,
Pushed away.
But it won't happen,
Atleast not today.
Even when I'm pushed,
I won't weep.
Oh I can't breathe,
I can't sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 28 July 2010

Nothing else to do, But look at you.....A very submissive line...intricately assembled words to depict the level of genuineness in this love affair. Well done

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David Beckham 28 July 2010

Nothing else to do but to look at you...A very submissive line penned with great potency of thought! totally enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing

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