Hamza Al Saieedy

Rookie - 20 Points (1994/7/28 / The-Qar \ iraq)

Can Not Be Re-mend!


Could the soulless flesh hand me the fact?
'No! ' though time of miracles hasn't end.
Thus not far from truth I shall act;
Broken souls cannot be re-mend!

Oh god! to whom I showed my love?
None was pure since there is desire!
Was I into you or what you're made of?
Poetic words can't get me any higher!

Would I love you when you turn to ash?
Should I? though you didn't stay!
Was my tears enough to heal your gash?
'No! ' you simply left; and left me to pay.

Submitted: Tuesday, March 12, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 13, 2013
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I made it for some-one broke my heart! !

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