Called To Soon Poem by louis rams

Called To Soon

Rating: 5.0


this is dedicated to leslies nephew- our prayers are with him

we saw the smile upon your face when
you felt the LORDS tender embrace.
when he told you it was time for you to depart
but that you'd always be in our hearts.

you went with our LORD, for you knew
that we would be sad 'it's true.'
but there is a better place in time
that we would all meet.
while HE sat on his heavenly seat.

judging all that came this way
which ones would go and which would stay.

but he knew that in our hearts
you became a very big part.
so through these gates we will pass
to gaze upon your face once again.
for here, you found many a friend.

your smile will light up our face once more
and the flame will reignite in our hearts,
and you will hear the words that
we all wanted to say
and to the LORD, we did pray.

we prayed that you would be our shining light
and through our prayers, we'd feel the LORDS might.

'you are our shining star'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2009

we saw the smile upon your face when you felt the LORDS tender embrace. when he told you it was time for you to depart but that you'd always be in our hearts. ...........................very tochy and emotional poem... it is so nice to read all your poems sir...10 read mine...o, lord....prayer...prayer for friends... humble submission.... beautiful world

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Christine Kerr 26 March 2009

A nice bit of write to have around to help someone grieving over the lost of their child. Very well put 10++++

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So lovely nice flow.. i love the ending its wonderful Krista

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