Bumpy Road Poem by Allison Unknown

Bumpy Road



Driving down
This bumpy road
Trying to avoid
All these obstacles
I have made
In my life
All the relationships
All the hatred
All of the emotions
In my time
Friends and enemies
Mostly enemies
Always trying
To kill me
On this road
Is mostly debris
Scattered on the side
My lights
Getting dimmer
As I go into the dark
I didnt see
That brick wall
Right in front of me
I hit the wall
Straight on
With much force
So I died
On this bumpy road
Called life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 07 April 2010

what evry1 else said (:

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Yose Alba 13 December 2009

Wonderful context, and I love how your poems all flow effortlessly.

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Sherbanu Molu 25 November 2009

this life of yours, is well DESCRIBED, LOV IT.

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This poem is really easy to read, it's just flows smoothly. I really get what you're saying about life, and crashing into a brick wall. I hope that life isn't always just a brick wall to you.

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