Red Slush Poem by Allison Unknown

Red Slush

Rating: 5.0


I run through the white
Winter snow
Running from you
You want me to do horrible things
With you
Trudging through snow
Very hard thing to do
You shout out my name
I keep going
A shot is fired
I scream
It hadn't hit me
You call my name
Telling me to come back
I don't listen
To you
If I come back
You'll hit me
You'll make my life even worst
Than before
Another shot is fired
It hits my hand
I scream in pain
I almost fall
But keep going
I know
I will not get away
Never have
Never will
You put drugs in my food
Make me almost paralyzed
Unable to fight you off
I can't feel a thing
Except your heavy weight on me
I try to scream
Your mouth covers mine
I hate you for that
Not letting me speak
On my own
I hear a noise
It's your belt
Coming undone
You take your shirt off
Unbutton mine
You start kissing my chest
My face is covered in tears
I want you off of me
Then you get off
I look at you
You're staring at me
Taking your jeans off
You grab my legs
I try to keep them shut
You just open them again
You rub yourself
Against me
I try to scream again
You put your hand over my mouth
And start to laugh
Telling me to be quiet
You unbutton my jeans
Unzip my zipper
And slide them down my legs
Im completly naked
So are you
I close my legs one more time
You yank them open
Telling me Im being difficult
You lay down on me
And bite my lips
You go down
Lower lower
You bite my neck
You bite my breasts
You are a sick person
You look down
And make it go in
In and out
In and out
I start to sob
You start to laugh
I hate you
I hate you so much
You scream out my name
My hand hurts so much
Im losing blood
Too much
You shoot one last time
It hits my side
I scream and fall
I lay their
Wanting to get this over with
I put my hand to my side
Pull it back
I see blood
I hear crunching snow
You're coming closer
You roll me over
I stare into your eyes
They are black
Lifeless eyes
You start to yell at me
You hit me
Many many times
Snow starts to fall
Down on my face
Everything is getting darker
Its almost pitch black
One last strike
I died
You keep hitting me
Even though you know
Im dead
You step back to look
At my body
You see the scars and marks
You created
Then you see
My blood
Going around my body
That white snow
I fell in
Is now
Nothing but
A red puddle
Of slush

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emilie DeVere 11 October 2009

Great job with this poem, I'm shivering, even though it's 25 degrees in my room. The imagery is really amazing. You should spell check your work more carefully, I noticed a few mistakes. Keep writing!

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I$land Gurl 11 October 2009

This is really touching... keep up the good work..

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Annie Girl 11 October 2009

wow this is really deep...... nice job

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Marilyn Lott 11 October 2009

I'm glad this isn't autobiographical, Allison but unfortunately it happens all the time. '10! ' for your realistic story telling ability. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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<font color=black>Nagourta 11 October 2009

Madame, I wish I hadn't read this, and I wish you hadn't written it, espescially(sp) since it isn't true. This isn't pleasurable, it isn't scary, it isn't sympathy arousing(because it isn't real) . I know most everyone on this website is kind and will say great job, but I just can't bring myself to do it, this is just...too much... Kindly, Nagourta

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Mackenzy Edmonds 07 May 2010

this is amazing lots of detail and its amazing

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Monisha Meadows 15 October 2009

this poem is awesomely sad..i love the detail...it also has alot of emotion

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Erin Seenauth 15 October 2009

that was veryy tough

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Jenna Osti 12 October 2009

Oh my godddd. this poem is so sad. Great detail and like Marilyn said glad its not autobiographical, but it does happen to people a lot. Anyways, I liked this poem a bunchh.

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Tiffany Channell 12 October 2009

Wow.. that had me cringing.. Amazing work!

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