Brutal Love Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Brutal Love

Rating: 3.8


Her hands were bound
to puppet strings
she couldn't run
she couldn't scream.

it was like one of those
dark fairy tales
grandma used to tell.

you wanted to protect me
from the hobyahs, only how much i
begged, they wouldn't take me,
for you
shut me in a box
and cast a spell on me,
a spell called
Love

which made me love you
and
loathe you forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

hi sis, i'm in love already!

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Melvina Germain 31 August 2006

Very good----Melvina

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Bridgid Patrick 07 March 2006

An on point piece of writing..good stuff x

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