Middle-Aged Couple Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Middle-Aged Couple

Rating: 5.0


My
Chanel
lipstick
seems
to have
crumbled
and
I don't
seem
to
care

His
pink
boxers
no
longer
irk me

we
share
a bed
like
brother
and
sister

and
everywhere
we
go
there
seems to
be
an
invisible
line
between
us

even if we appear to be going nowhere at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 20 May 2006

So many would agree, how to re-kindle a flame when embers seem so low both must blow upon them when willing love DuncanX

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Preeti - is here! 19 May 2006

Oh..i guess the change of title did help... hehe middle age(married life) crisis well described~ Preets

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Ballerina With Fins 13 May 2006

hmm, good point. I was debating with myself about the title. I'd better change it then. Thanks Fran

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Francesca Johnson 13 May 2006

Don't know about sharing a bed like sister and brother! ! Wouldn't be lovers if that was the case. Maybe the poem should be called 'Middle-aged Spouses' ha ha. Love, Fran xx

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