Brother Poem by Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Brother

Rating: 5.0


My mother did a wonder
When I was only eight.
Out came you as a thunder
To surprise me with your trait.

To me, it felt as a blunder:
Yet by paving the way,
You became my mentor;
Go along, you say.

With your voice so tender,
I wonder at the bay;
Still as a render,
Bright as a ray.

Brother
Friday, November 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: brotherhood,care,love,motivation,relationship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The teasing care of a brother to his sister could never be replaced by anyone. The relation is stronger than Parenthood.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2019

Lovely and expressive. Keep up the good work!

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Thanks a lot for your encouragement

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2018

sweet brotherly kiss compose more such simple ones 'twill be bliss read the poems of those who have read yours many won't come to know have you thanked them they all want a return read of their poems then they will know who ur

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 01 December 2018

Sure. I will do that. Thanks for being open hearted in letting me know your opinion. I really appreciate it.

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Prabir Gayen 30 November 2018

Keep writing more and more............

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 30 November 2018

Happy to hear from you

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Sreelakshmi 30 November 2018

Thanks for encouraging 😊😊

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Prabir Gayen 30 November 2018

Very sweet poem on the theme of brotherly affection....10++++++++

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Kerala, India
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