Broken Friendship Poem by shiny shine
Broken Friendship
Our friendship looked so joyful
now it appears doubtful
it upsets you when you see me with your friends
it upsets me when I see you with my friends
But now I see the truth
I now know that you were never my friend
You just acted like it
so you could use me
Now I am afraid to open up to a guy like that again
I am afraid to get backstabbed again
I do not want to go through the pain again
I have not recovered from you
It angers me when I think of how much I trusted you
I can not get my friends to see the truth about you
For I do not want them to go through this pain to
It is almost unbearable
But I know one day you will get your pay back
By far you are the hardest friend to let go so far
I hope that if you come back too me
I will have the strength to say ' no' to you
Because I do not want to be hurt again
It amazes me how I felt so close to you in only one year
I learned so much about you and you about me
This is one thing that is going to take a while to put in the past
It is painful to look at you if only for two seconds
Because I want to run up to you and hug you
To talk to you
To tell you that everything is going to be okay
For you to forgive me
and me to forgive you
Because I trully do miss you
You are always on my mind no matter what time
I want to make up for everything
We were as close as two friends could be without going out
But then you fell in love and left me behind
Your poem is painful to me...because it reminds me, my best friend and now he is my best enemy.........keep up the good work, and keep shining....TC. Floyd Minami
i am reminded of my freind a couple days ago, she used me... i really like this poem
a pick from life subject and you have done full justice to it...brought out the feel very well a 10
Sometimes we decide before it happens. So beware of losing the established friendship.. Nicely written composition.
Broken friendship is always painful but the lessons learnt helps us not to make the same mistakes. Well expressed lucid poem that is full of sad emotions. Thanks for sharing.
Our friendship looked so joyful now it appears doubtful it upsets you when you see me with your friends it upsets me when I see you with my friends But now I see the truth Rollercoaster part of palship.....narration continues into intimate details.Definitely a tenner.
We all, go through our trials and tribulations! It's all part, of growing up! We get hurt, but that's the way it is, as we go along, the way. One day, you'll look back and smile, as you remember, all the incidents you went through, during this time. You did a fine job, expressing yourself! Keep up, your good work.
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5/6/2024 7:58:34 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem is AWSOME and I can really relate to it. I tried to write a poem about it but you've mastered it! Keep up the good work! P.S. You have some typos.