Breathe Poem by Susan Marie Watkins

Breathe

Rating: 3.8


I breathe deeply
Inhaling prana
Expanding my lungs
Filling them with life force
With the energy
That created the universe
In an exploding gaseous exhalation
Of everlasting expansion
I smell the perfume of
Orange blossoms and gardenias
Heavy & cloying as damp earth
The dead wet petals scattered across the lawn
Crushed & bruised
Creamy white turning black around the edges
& In my hands
Red roses
Dripping over my casket
Pressing down
Suffocating me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 05 January 2008

Wow! An unexpected, rather Edgar Allan Poe sort of conclusion to a superbly penned description. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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