Braindead Poem by Carsten Thomsen

Braindead

Rating: 5.0


It could have been me
There
On life support

Bruised
Broken
boned
Bedritten
Bandaged
&
Braindead

Fractured skull leaking
Glassy eyes seeing
nothing
Darth Wader Breathing
Monotonously
Unreal

They tell me
Hard
Hard
Hard
Decicion
Has been taken

They will plug you
Permanently
Off
At 5
This evening

I sit here
Smoking
Writing
To keep calm
While your son
Asks for you

Outside
The world continues
Spinning
And the living
Keep on living

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roong S 24 July 2012

Wow..Very good write..! !

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Pheko Motaung 06 February 2012

Intoxicating! Magnificent! A true masterpiece.Thanks a lot.

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Jerry Buckley 26 January 2012

Darth Vader... back at you... good stuff

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Sajna Kailas 13 November 2011

amazing! ! ! very impressive and inspiring poem. good work.keep it up and God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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