Bottled Joy Poem by Dawn Ferrett

Bottled Joy

Rating: 4.8


The sounds of children laughing,
The fresh smell after rain,
The new buds in the Springtime,
The clatter of a train,
The buzzing of the bees
As they pollinate the flowers,
The ticking of the clock
As it counts away the hours,
The taste of Summer berries,
The smell of fresh-baked bread,
The memories of days gone by,
The pillows on my bed.
So many joys I'd bottle up
And keep them close to hand
To open when I'm feeling blue -
Oh! Wouldn't that be grand?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 15 July 2013

Another Wow! of a poem. I do hope you have been writing for a long time. Seems you've got the how of it. Read mine - The Captain's Secret - Adeline

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Jayne Davies 16 February 2013

I wish I had some of it Dawn! Great poem x Well done

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John Brown 29 September 2012

Lovely stuff Dawn. I enjoyed it. I'd buy a bottle of it any day.

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Ruth Walters 30 August 2012

.....and what a grand poem too. perfect rhythm and rhyme

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Heather Wilson 16 April 2012

Yes it would, and so is that poem, just grand.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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