Bond Poem by Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar

Bond

Rating: 4.8


It's that bond

Going round around you

Round and Round and round!

Sending the different sound



It's that bond

Bending your knee to the ground!

Cunning wheels taking all around with that round of your bond



It's that bond

Made that thunder around

Bleed till you shimmer around that crowd



It's that bond

you sink with it

Go round and round with it

Till you vanish in that pond

With that bond!


-Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar

09/08/2017

Wednesday, August 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,family
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 09 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Lakshmi. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Thank you Jazib for expressing your view on my poem! I will surely read your poems.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2017

Wow! what a beautiful poem! Amusing deliction on family and life. Let it be quoted some lines... It's that bond you sink with it Go round and round with it Till you vanish in that pond With that bond! Many thanks dear Lakshmi, keep the ball rolling...10/10

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Thank you Mr Mahakul for supporting word and quoting your favorite line :)

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Rini Shibu 09 August 2017

Wonderful poem on family and bonding.. Thanks Lakshmi for sharing

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Thank you Rini for supporting line :)

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