Board Walk..... Poem by Tracey Collins

Board Walk.....

Rating: 5.0


Walking down the board walk
from one end of the beach to
the other end, searching for
that hot dog stand...

Then off to A distance
the hot dog stand was spotted
the kids off in pursuit to
place their order...

We all sit down on A
picnic table to enjoy
our hot dogs and drinks
and watch the big oil ships.....

When done we started
our journey, back down
the board walk to our car....

So if you get board
take A stroll down
A board walk enjoying
the site you see......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 18 August 2006

Great rite me Lady........

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 August 2006

Boardwalk is a Poem that borders traditionalistic Prose...Quite melancholy, it takes one particular segment of the day and finely details it, but in a very relaxed and matter-of-fact manner. i like it a lot, Tracey'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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David Gerardino 14 September 2006

and watch the big oil ships, this makes the poem.............

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Michael Gale 01 September 2006

Dang it all-Havent eaten yet and after readin' this piece i'm hungry as all get out. Oh well-guess i'll havta wait a little more to eat. Great write Trace! I guess when ya git bored ya go onna bored walk. Ha! Ha! Ha! Gotta gofer now. God bless all poets-MJG.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 August 2006

lovely work, tracey. will explore more of your work. enjoy your single mothering.

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Lisa Wilkinson 21 August 2006

Brill Tracey. This reminds me of that song 'under the boardwalk' I'll probably be singing it all night now! x0x

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Konjit Berhane 21 August 2006

cooooooollllllll poem u got here Tracey peace and love on earth **KoNi**

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