Treasure Island

Elaine Mckendrick


Blurred Vision


Somewhere dark
walking in circles
frustration is all that arrives

somewhere deep
in black water
where all positivity has died

somewhere far from rational feelings
somewhere with impure dealings
somewhere below the surface
far from the kiss of the breeze on my skin
and far from the thoughts i once had within

what is this hell
when will i ever win?

Submitted: Tuesday, May 14, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013

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