Valerie Dohren

Veteran Poet - 2,787 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Bluebells


Oh they are so beautiful
Dancing beneath the trees
How they captivate my heart
Stood swaying in the breeze

Tiny bells of sapphire blue
Tinkling in the sun
A sweet enchanting melody
Within my mind is spun

I wish that they would linger
To charm and bring delight
In my mem’ry they will stay
This lovely woodland sight

Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

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  • Freshman - 1,782 Points Kevin Patrick (8/1/2013 5:24:00 PM)

    A painter of words for a spectacular impression, so beautiful and delicate a great work as always (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,588 Points Patricia Grantham (7/24/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    I have not seen this kind of flower in quite awhile. You have so vividly described
    it's beauty that I could have just imagined how lovely they were as they danced
    beneath the trees. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,113 Points Walterrean Salley (7/23/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Just love this Val. How lovely; I can see it with my mind’s eye. Great job. PS: Some months ago, I wrote one like this on bluebells. Hope to share it with my next postings. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,629 Points Ken E Hall (7/21/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    Dancing beneath the trees, a beautiful sight memories I have not seen for forty years But in my mem’ry they Have stayed thanks for this...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (7/21/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Bluebells ringing it color and spread the melody from it resonating move...i love bluebell but kind of sad thing, its hard to get here where i stay now_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,387 Points Valsa George (7/21/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    Like Wordsworth's Golden Daffodiles! Bluebells dancing beneath the tree is a lovely sight! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,909 Points Sandra Feldman (7/20/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    Tiny bells of sapphire blue how delightfully enchanting.
    Great poem in it's sincere simplicity., like a breath of fresh air. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 206 Points Dee Corpolongo (7/20/2013 5:59:00 PM)

    oh! I so love this poem, Val. I love nature and the flowers,
    and esp. bluebells....so beautiful and delightful! Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (7/19/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    Who doesn't love Bluebells? But they get hidden away in Woods and Forests.
    A nice poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,613 Points Hazel Durham (7/18/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Bluebells are one of my favourite flowers that stand out proud and delicate amongst the trees!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

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