Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,731 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Bluebells - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Oh they are so beautiful
Dancing beneath the trees
How they captivate my heart
Stood swaying in the breeze

Tiny bells of sapphire blue
Tinkling in the sun
A sweet enchanting melody
Within my mind is spun

I wish that they would linger
To charm and bring delight
In my mem’ry they will stay
This lovely woodland sight

Comments about Bluebells by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (8/28/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    bluebells are so beautiful an excellent write about them (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,048 Points Kevin Patrick (8/1/2013 5:24:00 PM)

    A painter of words for a spectacular impression, so beautiful and delicate a great work as always (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (7/30/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    A simply beautiful picture poem (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (7/25/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    A tunefully played poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,762 Points Patricia Grantham (7/24/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    I have not seen this kind of flower in quite awhile. You have so vividly described
    it's beauty that I could have just imagined how lovely they were as they danced
    beneath the trees. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (7/23/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Just love this Val. How lovely; I can see it with my mind’s eye. Great job. PS: Some months ago, I wrote one like this on bluebells. Hope to share it with my next postings. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,537 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (7/22/2013 1:29:00 AM)

    In my memory too. I remember the bluebell wood so well. Thanks for the thoughts.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,346 Points Ken E Hall (7/21/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    Dancing beneath the trees, a beautiful sight memories I have not seen for forty years But in my mem’ry they Have stayed thanks for this...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (7/21/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Bluebells ringing it color and spread the melody from it resonating move...i love bluebell but kind of sad thing, its hard to get here where i stay now_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,665 Points Valsa George (7/21/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    Like Wordsworth's Golden Daffodiles! Bluebells dancing beneath the tree is a lovely sight! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,772 Points Sandra Feldman (7/20/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    Tiny bells of sapphire blue how delightfully enchanting.
    Great poem in it's sincere simplicity., like a breath of fresh air. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 337 Points Dee Corpolongo (7/20/2013 5:59:00 PM)

    oh! I so love this poem, Val. I love nature and the flowers,
    and esp. beautiful and delightful! Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (7/20/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    Short sweet melody the way that it is. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Lucifera Santez (7/20/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    a marvel in itself......................... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/19/2013 9:35:00 PM)

    a good write about bluebells. nice imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (7/19/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    Who doesn't love Bluebells? But they get hidden away in Woods and Forests.
    A nice poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (7/19/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    A fine bluebell poem. They are a beautiful carpet of colour in forests. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,843 Points David Wood (7/19/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    I love bluebells too, they are so lovely to look at. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (7/18/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Bluebells are one of my favourite flowers that stand out proud and delicate amongst the trees!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,130 Points Dave Walker (7/18/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, the woods down the road from me is full of bluebells. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

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