Blue Eyes & Yellow Fields Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Blue Eyes & Yellow Fields

Rating: 3.1


The moon was a full white
The stars were shimmering bright
The summer wind blew lite
Those blue eyes faincied my site
Feathering leaves of yellow lillys
Tiggeled our sillys
As we flew over
These yellow fields into the night
And it comes to me with delite
I create this poem that I write
For this blue eyes yellow hair lady
I wisspered to last night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 07 September 2008

This was a very beautifully written poem. I love the imagery. Good job.

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, aryaindia 19 July 2008

You have a good hand at rhyming scheme and this must be your foremost advantages for writing poems. Good luck and god bless., arya

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Egi David Perdana 08 July 2008

amazing...please tell me the truth about this poem

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DELETED NOW 05 July 2008

that's sooo sweet! it's so dreamy also...

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