Death(Acrostic) Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

good poem, i like all the words you used to show emotion.. good write, millie.

good poem, but no one should feel that way. anyone who does doesnt try to be happy. life is what u make it.

POEMHUNTER! ha I like the Idea it's very good makes me wonder....

well written... very interesting idea to express your thoughts using acrostic style...but is it really acrostic?

Hi, artist! Impressive words used there. Written in a unique and fantastic way! Keep on writing! (Typing)

the piece is so nice...and although it is not long at all and has no complications and hard expressions....but it is so expressive and this is great about it....nice piece steve :)

Evil, is my breath this is a really cool line. my sis showed me this poem cause its one that she really likes of yours and she is right yet again... this is really good.good job. White Slash

wow..i agree with everyone else..it is very strong

Very powerful poem, lovely words used.

I like it. it's very strong. good job. *Purkey Girl*