Bleeding Mascara Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

You have a fine piece here, thoughts provoking only for few spelling check pls. such as; lonelyness(loneliness) , Solitire(solitaire) , Peachs(peaches) ....nice read. Thanks.

short, simple and to the pont. Also did i mention good. Great poet. good job.

Great job on this I loved the way you wrote this. 10

this reminds me of my favourite artist....so much to be seen in a small canvas...nice one

art of life, a bleeding heart, like me

i forgot about this poem :) very nice Carissa McBride -formerly bleeding mascara

I likek the title! a good work!

cute poem.............. -bleeding mascara

lovely! ! ! ! ! i liked this presentation keep writing and sharing I like your poems they are fun +++++++10 anjali

Love in disguise, great line. sometimes we do hide behind our love or are always trying to find it in the wrong places. *Purkey Girl*