Bloodlust Poem by Alexandra Gray

Bloodlust

Rating: 5.0


Bright full moon in a pitch black sky
On a starless night you can hear the wolf cry
Darkness looms the city while it sleeps
Black clock ticks as horror creeps
Dark hours begin when
Unseen things happen
Thirst for blood intensifies
As it comes out of its disguise
From a beautiful woman
To a vampire who can
Be deceiving only to satisfy
Her thirst so she won't die
Waiting for the next victim
Hiding in her place in the dim
Time slowly passes by
So as one person who's going by
Devil red eyes staring
Sharp pointed fangs glinting
Under the silver moon
Black crows start to croon
In a swift motion she held her prey
Ceasing his life before even turning to day
Savoring the blood that she sips
Wiping the drop from her lips
Slowly getting up to hunt another
Leaving the lifeless body to wither

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Exciting job is done,10++

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Pure Remedy 03 November 2008

for your age.. your amazing! ! . ur very talented! ! . man keep it goin u have something.. your a natural writer! ! !

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Anjali Sinha 03 November 2008

oops! ! ! ! ! ill get scared to read this during nights. hey I do night shifts too whatever --great write---+10 regards anju

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Ency Bearis 02 November 2008

great imagery write...a creepy one...well done...A10 Ency Bearis

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Mimzy Sue 02 November 2008

aweee..............it scared me.....but it is a very nice poem and well written. You are very talented. keep it up Cheers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! mimzy

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