Blood Torture Asylum Or Chaos Sanctuary Poem by Thomas Brillowski

Blood Torture Asylum Or Chaos Sanctuary

Rating: 4.5


I wake up by day,
But the sky is darkish.
A cryptical place.
By a malignant aura,
I am surrounded,
My view darkens.

Can you hear that?
The forest whispers my name.
This voice is choking my blood.
I peer out the window,
Far away the forest
No one out there.

Crows shouting the eternity of torment.
I turn to the door.
It opens, but no one behind there.
Suddenly the air disappears.
A cold-looking,
And a grievous hand on my shoulder.

I feel the nearness of death.
Suddenly I see a lonely widow.
A beautiful rose in her blood-stained hands,
But totally dark is she.
She pierces my heart.
I freeze with her blood-shot eyes.

It shatters my soul.
Helplessly hoping spans my sadness,
That I feel.
No way out.
She takes my mind in chains.
Desperate blood flowing from my eyes.

She laughs,
She enjoys it to see,
My fear, my pain.
She is the one who holds my life in her hands
In this cage of the psychotic nightmare.
This widow, a personification

Of cruelty and the beast,
Unleashes the doom.
Here, I will still be with her,
In reign of death.
This is my new penitentiary,
The chaos sanctuary.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ekaterina M. Polischuk 24 July 2012

i like your imagination, the way you play with words. in my country it is a kind of Gothic art, philosophical art, i think. so, i can say bravo, because i`ve read this poem and i want to read other ones))))

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 July 2012

Reminds blood soaked and smelly gas chambers 1940-1945.A Polish writing german verses is also strange.

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