ramesh rai

Gold Star - 15,010 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Blissful Tears - Poem by ramesh rai

Behold in thy blissful tears
pearls are drifting with all cheers
I choose each pearl to kiss my soul
to encounter all sorrows of my life

Each pearl is more precious
than billions of dollars, more significant than all gems of desire
a quaffer can determine
my solicitation adjure your juvenile heart
to sing the melody
play on your guitar
you play on each string
till the stars engulf all vibration
and start twinkling over night
with all waves of string
tears may drop with each scale
with all rhytheme of soulful song
you may be forgetting
your bleeding fingure
you may be forgetting
before and after you
you sing
to raise the melody
to the highest peak
and cover the sky


Comments about Blissful Tears by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/11/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    Wow...Fantastic write....... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,896 Points Hazel Durham (7/8/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful write, complex with amazing imagery!
    Best wishes and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,862 Points Dave Walker (7/6/2013 3:54:00 PM)

    A really wonderful poem, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/5/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    A hard poem to pen down. With so many conotations alluding to to other than the obvious.
    A read I go over and over and like a slippery snake I have a hard time taming. But I like the challenge. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (7/4/2013 11:14:00 AM)

    great sentiments
    wot
    what a wonderful piece
    loved it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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