Blind Poem by Khaos Dven

Blind

Rating: 5.0


Intense violence, an absurd view, on a select few, what can be done, with any sort of gun? Im a complete brute, i have every weapon to constitute. My arm full of blood, i step back and put on my hood. Walking in the rain, my energy all drained. Another one down, being surrounded all around. Round two, im ready, bring it on fool. Im ready becuse i have nothing to give up so shut up! Put em up! im down to fight all of you, i have nothing left, i dont fear death.1,2,3,4, down and out, they didnt even have time to shout. So blind with rage i didnt know what i was fighting for. Lets go! My vision blurred, i can only see red, im blind, i feel dead. No fear, drunk on beer. It's raining blood. Oh god it's everywhere, i can feel there glare, there evil stare. Walking again but i dont know where, going crazy, nothings fazing me. Now i feel so tired, tired of breathing, tired of heaving, tired of living. it's going so bad, and none of the things are making me sad. Ugh the pain again, ima fight even death. HE CANT steal my breath! Blind rage wound up, i feel like i was trapped in a cage. Here i go though to the left stage. I finally look around to see what i had won, what i had been crowned. But there was no one left, they were all gone like a theft. O God i have killed everyone i hold dear, even when i didnt fear, but now theres a continual tear, there cries i didnt hear. I thought i had killed all my enemies but they were all friends, adn now it's all dead ends. im all alone in a sea of enemies, and now no one sees. What can i do now? A simple thought 'How'? I was so blind but now i can see, i am a guilty man but im free. Its over, no one can fix this, its 'just another instance'. There all dead! ! How could i have killed them instead? ! For them i would have BLED! I was so blind and now my girl i cant even find. It's a perfect picture..rain..me insane...im to blame..i was so Blind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 06 August 2008

Fantastic expression. It is a sad fact that we often hurt the ones we love the most. It is a way of hurting ourselves I suppose, but life goes on with slightly clearer insight. All the best to you, Tai

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