Bleeding Heart Poem by Vikram G. Aarella
Bleeding Heart
Wherever I go, whatever I do
I just see you smiling there
Your heart was my home
without it now, I have gone bare.
I just think of you all the time
when I work, sleep or dine
Why did you leave me like this?
I just wanted you to be mine.
Was I asking for too much?
now all the blame is on me
For loving you, more than anyone else
you know my heart is bleeding,
But for me, no one can see.
CR VGA
02/08/09
Tydraw
nice write...brings out the pain very well young ones feel while pursuing love relations...10
Beautiful love poem..........she is a full to walk away from someone who can write like you do
it is so real feeling in your poem dear. it is heart touching too and i admire it from deep of my heart... keep writing and u may shine one day.....10 read mine mary to marry....miss i miss u
I understand your pain..... This poem is similar to my poem ' My Heart Bleeds' by Lata Raaj.
you maintained a nice flow, the second to last line is executed well. the tone is appropriate, great job
Hi Vikram, You've managed to show the pain of a bleeding heart very clearly here. How do we allow it to get to us like this? Love, always full of questions. Frank
This was a very touching sentiment for a broken heart.. Great imagery and a great use of words, well placed. Enjoyed reading this poem! May God bless us all-MJG.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 7:36:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nobody sees it... one with pure heart and pure love can only feel it....