Black Tears Poem by Allison Unknown

Black Tears

Rating: 5.0


So much pain
Putting the knife
To my wrist
It hurts just too much
Watching
Thinking
How I ended this way
My soul
Is getting taken over
By little demons
Dragging me to black saftey
When I fall
Down into the black hole
I wonder where I am
Something starts to laugh
Muahahahahaha
I wonder who it is
I only have one guess
Im in hell
The devil had taken me
From life to death
For that I thank him
I look down
And see my wrists
They are covered
With knife scars
I start to cry
But not regular tears
Im crying
Black tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BrittanyXD S 16 March 2010

hey i LOVE this poem! that was great. keep writing hun.

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Nathan Barkley 24 November 2009

wow i can feel the darkness come flowing out of this poem. I can feel the pain. It was very good poem thanx for sharing.

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i used to cut myself, i wanted to kill my self but each day i would tell myself no no yet maybe things will be better tomarow so i waited and hoped and after two and a half years of waiting and razors things did finally did get better and finally had the peace and happiness i'd longed for. i like this poem good work :)

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 08 November 2009

Don't give up....it is very easy to slip into the darkness..I should know....keep writing...your words touch others more than you know^^....this poem is very intense i feel the pain..the wondering....the defeat.....much vivid i should say....a truly good one^^

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