Black/Red Poem by justin walker

Black/Red



(another old poem that started me out not only in more writing but also counseling hahaha.)



Night creeps upon the house
The only thing moving is a mouse
The beating of a heart....stops
Songs of death...start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 06 March 2009

Short but a perfect poem, agreed with Fiona. An inverse start. Keep on writing, Justin. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Fiona Davidson 19 November 2008

Can't say anything other than perfection...thank you...

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