Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 264 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Birthday Of Mars - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

There is a Planet in a twirl of light
That offered its soul to a great might
That might is an angel, he is called Mars
His soul gives existence to all of us
Happy birthday Mars, you are the night's brave knight.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I offer this poem_ Also this limerick_ to Dear Mars.
The holy soul of the Milky way and me.
Happy Birthday Mars, Hope to see your Victory in the life, because I am sure that you will reach it.
Your Pleasure and your victory is my wish
Ellias.


(1391/7/14)

6: 18 minutes Pm.

Friday.

Comments about Birthday Of Mars by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Silver Star - 3,113 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/16/2012 12:30:00 AM)

    Wow i enjoyd dis super rhyming brisk on a fav topic- mars. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/6/2012 4:28:00 AM)

    Great words! Encore!
    Reading your poems makes my day! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 6, 2012


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