Big Zero Or Pied Piper Of Hamelin Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Big Zero Or Pied Piper Of Hamelin



Billions of yesterdays evaporated
Trillions of events vanished— forgone

Dreamy futures hug pale presents
Pasts weep from coconut tree hole
Like infant birds— mutely

These unlimited physical
And meta-physical demands
Boundless chemical
Or biological feelings— hollow

Both prince and street children will
Taste the same door entrance
Big zero or pied piper of Hamelin— coming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 22 June 2009

QUITE A THOUGHTFUL PRESENTATION OF THOUGHTS... ; -)

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 22 June 2009

nice poetic expression sir really hearttouching

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Priyanka Bhowmick 22 June 2009

wonderfully scripted piece....

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 22 June 2009

Very good write, Asraful ji.

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Rakesh Bedi 22 June 2009

Projection of Truth in a beautiful manner!

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Pandian Angelina 27 June 2009

Yes, as King Solomon laments Life is nothing, life is nothing! No one can reach the heights Of your imagination or imagery Sir, excellent work of word art! I'm not worthy to comment on likes of you But, thanks for giving me the oppurtunity To read and enjoy your poem. Angel

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Satheesan Rangorath 26 June 2009

Again another wonderful poem with an aesthetic sense of a poet.Well written with imagination and controlled vocabulary. Greetings Satheesan rangorath

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Marieta Maglas 25 June 2009

''These unlimited physical And meta-physical demands Boundless chemical Or biological feelings— hollow '' it is really, indeed an extraordinary poem....10++++

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a wonderful write....crafted beautifully...10

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Brishti Mazumdar 25 June 2009

Dreamy futures hug pale presents Pasts weep from coconut tree hole Like infant birds— mutely ...Wow, , , , What a thought process! ....Again I am charmed with your capacity of expressing important things in a very few words.....A rare quality....10++ Always from Brishti with love....

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