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Christian K. Montiel

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Beyond the sun.


Beyond the sun.
Go ahead go way, but take this pain with you inside of your heart, don’t look back because I will be putting my life back together.
You said that you love me, but I don’t believe you anymore, you said that you think about me but I wonder if you did when you were with him?
I did love you with all my heart and I give up everything just for you, but love is just words into the wind and I did felt something for you so strong that it will go beyond the sun and that was the love for you.

Submitted: Saturday, October 20, 2007
Edited: Monday, April 18, 2011

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