Treasure Island

Christian K. Montiel

(Tampico, Tamaulipas, Mex.)

Beyond the sun.


Beyond the sun.
Go ahead go way, but take this pain with you inside of your heart, don’t look back because I will be putting my life back together.
You said that you love me, but I don’t believe you anymore, you said that you think about me but I wonder if you did when you were with him?
I did love you with all my heart and I give up everything just for you, but love is just words into the wind and I did felt something for you so strong that it will go beyond the sun and that was the love for you.

Submitted: Saturday, October 20, 2007
Edited: Monday, April 18, 2011

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