Captain Cur

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Bewitching Battle on Curdi, Pirate Adventures (16)


Completely reckless, I charged forward
advancing quickly toward her retreating form.
I gazed in concave eyes, her left arm stirred
unimpressed by the fury of my scorn.

I raised my hand and lunged with my knife;
she quickly sidestepped and I felt a blow
befall the right side of my head cold as ice,
stunned, I kissed the ground, then shaken rose.

She was more agile than expected
accomplished with the weapon of her craft,
I was more cautious, feinting, protecting
my flank as the witch spun her deadly staff.

I circled wide looking for a weakness
hunched over keeping my head and body low,
pressing close, hard, then retreating
as her eyes shone with a venomous glow.

I switched knife hands blade in then jutting out;
she countered with unimaginable skill,
I used the uneven stones to create a rout
moving in sharply for the kill.

I grasped her and splayed her upon the altar;
she kicked away my knife cutting her leg,
I attempted strangling with renewed fervor
ridding the world of this treasonous sage.

Powerful spells, words spewing from her lips
hoarse incantations with bedeviling sounds
unknowing I slowly loosened my grip,
her staff knocked me unconscious to the ground.

Submitted: Sunday, March 31, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Bewitching Battle on Curdi, Pirate Adventures (16) by Captain Cur )

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/7/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    she might have been defeated jusy with a simple smile~nb (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,405 Points Diane Hine (3/31/2013 10:31:00 PM)

    Action sequences are devilishly difficult to write I think, but this poem is skillfully executed.
    Concave eyes sounds nasty! (Report) Reply

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