Begining Of An End Poem by Asif Baloch
Begining Of An End
Break your fingers and stop writing,
the rhymes on sadness and deniels
Wear the cloth of darkness
cut your tongue, become
mute and numb
Start counting on the days tho left
stop begging for the love out of hate
start rising to get another fall
stop looking for the pieces thus lost
start searching for those broken smiles
stop wailing for shattered dreams
Stop crying, stop wailing
drink your own tears, asif
and start dying
hey asif, now u better stop writing all this crying stuff you are made to write better things like that nice one u sent in my inbox for this Ill give u ++++10 no doubt for the quality of your poem but I dont like the theme-- thinking all the while how sad you are
powerful emotions...powerful lines...i liked the way you wring out the pain soaked feels inside your mind...highly expressive...10
Wow! lovely... Asif it shows that you tasted th bitter truth of life... Nice yara
Your images are drastically vivid and melancholy. I hope they have done the job for you getting negativity out of your system as it is a extremely powerful piece of writing. Well done. Karin Anderson
It's a beautiful piece. I like it greatly, mainly because of your expressive nature. Awesome write keep it up. :)
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4/26/2024 1:51:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Good poem Asif. Do what you have vowed in this poem but the last line I shall read....'and start living'.