Wandering down the lanes of summer Hill
Enjoying scintillating chill blow of wind
Mild, at times wild were the blows
Seems like wind is trying to lift me in its hand
Saw the staggering steps of my beloved
Coming from the other end of the hill
Her pink stole was fluttering like the waves of sea end
Eyes were blinking like the twinkling of stars
hairs were entangled on the face all around
A beautiful scene is embedded in my mind
Enough to rejuvenate the pensive days of Life
I like to call moments like these, magical moments of amazing beauty and it is always a pleasure to read about them. Very well written.
Nice poem depicting the beauty of nature. Really awesome. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing.....
A very colorful and exciting picture you have portrayed in this well penned and poignant poem! A thought provoking write that clearly indicates that POETRY runs in your blood! With this great TALENT, please, keep inspiring the WORLD! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...
Very beautiful poem, great imagery thanks for inviting me to read it - keep writing!
What a wonderfull poem. Life is like that too. Sometimes beautiful things in life are blowen to us with harsh winds behind it.
A beautiful scene is embedded in my mind Enough to rejuvenate the pensive days of Life A thing of beauty is a joy forever.Eyes reveal the truth.Do read my LIPSTICK and IN MOMENTS
great imagination and imagary on this poem. It give you a great picture in your head. something i never see anyone do. keep it up
the last two lines were especially beautiful.. Namaste Santosh Sharma
Beautiful imagery in winds of elemental forces and the beauty of the beloved to share it with. Truly a memory to cherish.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
like the style, and very nice picture of your thoughts