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Captain Cur

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Beauty Fathomless, love poems


Beauty fathomless resplendent deft brim
of mountainous heaving heightened view
as the trees and rock forms visually thin
breathe together cleaved in soft breasted hue.

Caressing her on dark amorous deck
grasping cool moon and feed it to her lips
sweet spiraling waves lick perspiring neck
senses wildly spiked with skin passion's whip.

Claiming ten stars as her necklace charm suns,
each one brightening and aligning space,
breakers crash, cross, rays upwards gently hung
reflecting stellar aspects of her face.

Salty vistas taste the deepening gorge
journey's necklace, pulsing lips, heart this wish
blindness bares uninhabitable shore,
my life ending in her eternal kiss.

Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012

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  • Freshman - 1,219 Points Ken E Hall (6/17/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    Clever voyage thru her necklace charm suns, mother earth excels as the moon feeds her lips..I'm gunna buy my self a boat sailing for her eternal kiss...nice to read very different and goog...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,244 Points Patricia Grantham (3/14/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    A very refreshing piece of poetry in all it's romanticism. It puts the reader in the
    middle of the scenery. Truly enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (9/6/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    The title says it all Beauty Fathomless- Fathomless beauty. The essence of beauty permeating through the universe, throughout planet earth, radiating from your soul. (Report) Reply

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