Beauty Fathomless, Love Poems Poem by Captain Cur

Beauty Fathomless, Love Poems

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Beauty fathomless resplendent deft brim
of mountainous heaving heightened view
as the trees and rock forms visually thin
breathe together cleaved in soft breasted hue.

Caressing her on dark amorous deck
grasping cool moon and feed it to her lips
sweet spiraling waves lick perspiring neck
senses wildly spiked with skin passion's whip.

Claiming ten stars as her necklace charm suns,
each one brightening and aligning space,
breakers crash, cross, rays upwards gently hung
reflecting stellar aspects of her face.

Salty vistas taste the deepening gorge
journey's necklace, pulsing lips, heart this wish
blindness bares uninhabitable shore,
my life ending in her eternal kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

nice love poem captain. the last stanza so telling.

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Ken E Hall 17 June 2013

Clever voyage thru her necklace charm suns, mother earth excels as the moon feeds her lips..I'm gunna buy my self a boat sailing for her eternal kiss...nice to read very different and goog...regards

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Patricia Grantham 14 March 2013

A very refreshing piece of poetry in all it's romanticism. It puts the reader in the middle of the scenery. Truly enjoyed it.

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