Captain Cur

Rookie - 415 Points (England)

Beauty Fathomless, Love Poems - Poem by Captain Cur

Beauty fathomless resplendent deft brim
of mountainous heaving heightened view
as the trees and rock forms visually thin
breathe together cleaved in soft breasted hue.

Caressing her on dark amorous deck
grasping cool moon and feed it to her lips
sweet spiraling waves lick perspiring neck
senses wildly spiked with skin passion's whip.

Claiming ten stars as her necklace charm suns,
each one brightening and aligning space,
breakers crash, cross, rays upwards gently hung
reflecting stellar aspects of her face.

Salty vistas taste the deepening gorge
journey's necklace, pulsing lips, heart this wish
blindness bares uninhabitable shore,
my life ending in her eternal kiss.


Comments about Beauty Fathomless, Love Poems by Captain Cur

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (7/15/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    nice love poem captain. the last stanza so telling. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,512 Points Ken E Hall (6/17/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    Clever voyage thru her necklace charm suns, mother earth excels as the moon feeds her lips..I'm gunna buy my self a boat sailing for her eternal kiss...nice to read very different and goog...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (3/14/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    A very refreshing piece of poetry in all it's romanticism. It puts the reader in the
    middle of the scenery. Truly enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (9/6/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    The title says it all Beauty Fathomless- Fathomless beauty. The essence of beauty permeating through the universe, throughout planet earth, radiating from your soul. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012



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