Bearing Any Grudges Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Bearing Any Grudges

Rating: 4.5


As
I stare
At this barren
Winter tree
That has shed
Its leaves
Outside
My window,

I actually see
A Buddha
Inanimate,
In touch with
Its true nature.

Serenely detached
And willing
To accept
The wheel
Of creation
And dissolution,
Without bearing
Any grudges.

© 2016

Sunday, January 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: buddha,life,nature,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 18 January 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and subtly penned in poetic diction with spiritual insight. An insightful depiction of total submission to the Will of God, which is the essence of Buddhism. Thanks for sharing Govind. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Karl Fowler 11 January 2016

These words stay with me long after reading this poem for the first time and leaves a strong yet peaceful impression. the tone is so simple and flowing and yet leaves me with a positive provoking thought (for me at least is always what sets very good poetry apart from the mediocre. really love this piece and comes from an intelligent, sensitive and mature head on young shoulders. Karl Fowler, Opus London

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Anjana R 10 January 2016

The poem is simple and nice while being contemplative and philosophical.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 October 2018

Serenely detached And willing To accept The wheel Of creation... a great meditation led by the tree without leaves to Buddha...... and the silence, stillness.. thank u. tony

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Richard Wlodarski 14 January 2018

A deeply spiritual meditative piece. Govind, thank you so much for temporarily putting me into such a wonderful state.

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Kasper Lau 31 December 2016

Marvelous poem.

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Pamela Sinicrope 01 September 2016

This is a beautiful poem, quite soothing to read. I spend much of my time staring at trees, barren, covered, and icy. The idea of the tree being serenely detached like a Buddha when it is dormant intrigues the mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Roseann Shawiak 12 February 2016

Very spiritual and inspirational to meet the will of God through nature, sublime diction, touching my mind gently with the reality of God in our lives.10+++ Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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