Be You Poem by Jaya Das

Be You

Rating: 5.0


I may not be the poetry of a poet,
The protagonist Of a heroic tale,
The melodious notes of nightingale,
I may not be the rainbow....
Formed in the moist blue sky,
The spectrum of different colours
May not come out from the mirth of my cry,
I am just one of the beautiful creatures god made,
An ordinary yet unique in my own being,
I can't be moulded in the frame of others' thoughts
With lucidity in thinking, independence in my outlook,
Like the liberated wind blowing and,
The free rain falling, anywhere in anyway,
I would flaunt my flaws and do, , ..
Whatever to me, My heart say.

Thursday, October 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: personal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 14 October 2016

Expression and words are easy to communicate. Thinking is straight to penetrate the origin.Thanks. Write more....

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Jaya Das 14 October 2016

I will...Thank you so much for your precious words...means a lot ☺

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Mj Lemon 23 June 2017

In these lines you demonstrate that free can and does mean exceptionally precious. Great poetry, Jaya.

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Hans Vr 12 February 2017

Beautiful ode to each of us being unique in our flaws and our talents. A superb invitation for each of us to live an authentic life.

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

Soft Subtle yet strong words! ! loved the way you penned it Poet! ! and thus you are.. May not come out from the mirth of my cry, I am just one of the beautiful creatures god made, An ordinary yet unique in my own being, Thank you for sharing! ! a 10+++! ! !

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Jaya Das 16 December 2016

Thank you so much poet if u think so☺☺☺

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 01 November 2016

Being yourself is to do what your heart tells you to, irrespective of what people will say. And Not what people tell to do. Thank you for sharing. Teen.

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Renu Kakkar 31 October 2016

Thanks for sharing. Nice flow of words.

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Jaya Das 31 October 2016

Ty ma'am, it means a lot

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