Be With Me Poem by CAROL HUGHES

Be With Me

Rating: 4.9


So happy to have
you here with me
as I sit by your side
wistful and longing
for your arms to
reach round
your lips to
complete mine
I am in love
be with me now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 02 September 2009

your lips to complete mine............ oh what a depth of beauty by breath of breeze lip rejoices by scarlet glows in eyes darkness embrace the desire heart reels through red inflaming fire in blood..........wonder awes by whispers yet it swoons moment differed, ingeniously luscious by the imagery flowing through lucidity,10+++, thanks for sharing

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a lovely poem on love

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James B. Earley 15 March 2009

This is so convincing. We know...we just know...events....are indeed momentary! Quite creative.

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~ Jon London ~ 14 March 2009

What a beauty this is Carol my friend, soft and tender lines give the reader a loving caress 10+

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Naidz Ladia 11 March 2009

less words but full of love..cheers, , naizz

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