Asleep While Living Poem by CAROL HUGHES
Asleep While Living
I'm in a room filled
With raw, cloying desire
What do I see?
Walls of green
Adding to the envy
Of greedy icy eyes
Taking in the scene
Poor unfilled spirits
Removed they are
Nature and self frozen
Unable to emit a glow
Send a message from afar
One longingly subtle
Flitting across space
A silent heated signal
Feathering the air
Tenderly landing
Gently caressing the face
The welcoming lips and cheeks
Of one they sense
Will flutter their hearts
Who will erase the doubt
Lift them from their seats
Openly share tender embraces
Let untapped pits of fire
So long hidden
Come to life and erupt
Finally joining with nature
Becoming true to themselves
So long hidden Come to life and erupt Finally joining with nature Becoming true to themselves.............utterly persuasive longing for a life touching the own song, excellent flow feeling by desire of luscious glow lucked in nature, ingeniously curved over the beauty intoned,10+++, thanks for sharing
a superb write ma'am with so much depths, bravo thanks 10+++++++++ rgds asif
This is awesome. Are you really 8? If you are then it is not only awesome but amazing. Great write! 10+
The awakening........of you from boredom..like a sleepless night.you're freshened from the touches of the special one.......you're longing for. I luv this piece Carol.Its superbly written.A + and 10+.
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 7:25:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
very encouraging and narratively ecstasy