Be My Vision Poem by Marieta Maglas

Be My Vision

Rating: 3.2


I'm your dream bird,

Teach me the flight,

Teach me the infinite.

In your impassioned soul

My love pulses.

I can understand your meaning.

Be my vision for a moment.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anshul Gupta 31 August 2011

Very eloquent use of words and written directly from the soul without any intervention of the mind's veil... It was really a nice poem.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 June 2010

Beautiful, a single word sufficient for this piece of creation. Beautiful. And when I feel In your impassioned soul My pain pulse Impassioned soul........possible! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Once our RNT in a drama wrote a line...Srijaner aage Debota jamon aka...(Tr. How almighty[God] felt alone before creating the universe and compelled to be two (Duality) . o.k. Regards, 10+ Apoet

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Eyan Desir 19 June 2010

Well keep expressing good write

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Omar Ibrahim 19 June 2010

I'm sad because you don't invite me to your new poems anymore..i have so much friends and I don't always remember to visit them all..please tell me whenever you post a poem...this poem is nice and thoughtful...i imagine you as a bird in a dream that's cool you know! thanks for sharing

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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