Be Poem by Secret Yellow Rock Chick

Be



Be the tall mountains on land
Be the crashing waves in the sea.
I know you are my lover
Come out and say it to me.

Be the sun in my day
Be the moon in my night.
I already know you love me
Come give me some of your light.

Be the clouds of a thunderstorm
Be the clouds of a nice day.
I know you are my lover
Come with me this way.

Be the fragrant spring blossoms
Be the crisp autumn leaves.
I already know you love me
Our paths will soon weave.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Thomas 22 July 2008

Oh wow - tight structure, lovely scansion, superb images, & evokes real feelings that bring tears to the eyes (good ones!) Keep it up, SYRC! ! - you have a real gift here.

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 June 2008

fine emotions expressed so softly, , , , thanx for sharing

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