Forever Falling Poem by Secret Yellow Rock Chick

Forever Falling

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I am forever falling
in this dark, bottomless chasm.
All hope of those who would help me
peer over the top.
All those who will help me
wait at the bottom.
I am forever falling
in this dark, bottomless chasm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Hi Secret, this has so much impact for such a short write...powerful expression 10 best wishes Jon.

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Frank Cannon 26 June 2008

Great visualisation.. well worked.

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