Baris Dance Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Baris Dance

Rating: 5.0


a dance of war
strongly masculine
display a strong sensitivity
in the myriad of moods and expressions

a sacral dance
performed usually dressed warriors
with distinctive triangular

white headdresses
bearing weapons such as
spears, spiked shields or swords

they dance in line
posing aggressively
before attacking each other
in simulated battles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Carlos Abeti 01 September 2008

i liket it, it made me imagine hoe that dance was(is) ....good.

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Adeiza A. 05 September 2008

So cool...such a situation of unease and tense you yet explain with a bit of humour. I like your approach to war here in the poetry, Baris Dance.

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Egi David Perdana 03 September 2008

war is pain, and pain is all you don't need

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 02 September 2008

Dance-like light-footed poem that takes us on a short but deeply felt sway through a dance ritual of which we, in the end, don't know if it ought to send down shivers our spine or if we ought to be feeling ourselves on the safe side of the troupe.

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Jeff Rushton 02 September 2008

Ahmad, I really like the room for interpretation, yet clarity for a single vision. Well done.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 01 September 2008

Vow! I am sure it was an amazing dance! Good write!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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