Back At Home Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Back At Home

Rating: 5.0


Sun emerged in sky as usual
With full light and looked casual
It was daily mission
With no doubt in any season

I do not know why I was not in mood
Delicious breakfast dish was served and by the side she stood
I did not look at even with interest
Mother had prepared it with good test

“I feel no good “told to mother and ventured out
I chose different and unknown route
I wanted to feel pulse of mind
The exact reason to know and find

The beautiful garden was just before me
All colorful flowers zoomed in air along with trees
They were all in different mood but opened with pleasure
The season was beautiful quietly to reassure

Why flowers smile with beautiful colors?
Why is it so unique to feel about honor?
Their appearance and show looked so elegant
They were un sure of their existence but gloom was absent

We are surprisingly intelligent animal called human
It is certainly a gift from almighty with good omen
It now made me to understand about hidden treasure
That was with me yet I failed to see it for sure

When sun, moon and stars can shine in their space
What made me to suffer mentally in this case?
I must never be unreasonable with nature
When it has lot more to teach us for future

I took steps back at home
Mother was t the door to welcome
She knew it from her kind heart
That I can never go away and prefer to part

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sun emerged in sky as usual With full light and looked casual

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Karl Boyer4 minutes ago Interesting

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Violet Schod4 minutes ago Beautiful imagery and story. Double check for clarity and it could be better. Comment +1 Nice Job

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Colleen Ruiz4 minutes ago Tale of youth Comment +1 Great poem but could use revision.

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Nasrudheenp ParameswaranLess than a minute ago A fine comparative poem Comment +1 its a nice mix of nature and personal feelings

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Shihabudheen K J 06 July 2013

nice poem...never part with treasures

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good Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 35 minutes ago good

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Michele Carter and Gurdeep Singh Kohli like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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good Dustin2 minutes ago good, reflective although I think I took a different meaning away than perhaps the author intended?

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Taranum BhatiaLess than a minute ago the poem nicely captures the teachings which the mother nature has to offer. Comment 0 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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