(b) 21 (Pain/Longing) O Beloved Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(b) 21 (Pain/Longing) O Beloved
O Beloved
When the pain in my heart is at its excruciating best
When my sensibilities are leaving me
When my mortal body wants an eternal rest
Will you meet me, then? ?
O Beloved
When its neither day nor night
When my body has stopped spinning with this planet
When its neither dark nor there's light
Will you meet me, then? ?
O Beloved
When I am finally singing in peace
When I am soaring up fearlessly
When my soul has got the release
Will you meet me, then? ?
T.O.>>>like the smoothness in the flux of this fine piece..Moves like a Doves feather on sateen....Indeed, & as per usual, a Fine Penning''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Very nice write TO, flows excellently and has a deep emotional centre to it. Good read. Love Ernestine XXX
the body is full of planets, rivers, and seas. the universe is so too. they all add up to make life. the universe is itself a life.
I voted a 10 for this one.... and I think I will have a response soon! ! ! ! !
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I would like to translate this poem
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My Response TO: O Beloved…… Only I would be there; If you get an agonizing sting in your heart If you are deserted by the deepest feelings And, if you have to give up the ghost None else, but I will be there! Only I would be there; If time ceases you between dusk and dawn If earth stops its spin and you are paralyzed And, if the shadowy scares and the light dies None else, but I will be there! Only I would; Compose an elegy for my final peace Cheer you to take that valiant success Give you the triumph dais and let liberate And then, I would rest in peace (R.I.P.) !