(b) 1 (Pain/Longing) Where Did I Go Wrong Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(b) 1 (Pain/Longing) Where Did I Go Wrong
My heart is numb...so is my mind
Lost the power of thought...its got entwined
Oh, Why did you walk into my life?
I was quite happy....without any strife
You came with your gentleman like demeanour
With a cloak of decency, my emotions got stirred
I was a fool opening up my heart
Letting you puncture it with a dart
Darn, even my instincts got misguided by your charm
Caught unguarded, you had me completely disarmed
Wooed and then deserted, it didnt take long
My heart was pure, so where did I go wrong?
Beautifully done, , , , , holds the charm yet weeps the pain an' in a wired way shows the shortness of time, , , , , , , , , , , I see no wrong in this poetic little rhyme just a poetess expression of mind........well done, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
A charming couplet of romance never meant to be....I like this, T.O.... Thie Poem is as pure as your heart, my dear...Solid crafting... FJR
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5/5/2024 9:46:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Where did YOU go wrong? You did not. Ask, Why did he go wrong? With, a heart so pure - anyone else Could he ever go? Ask US and we tell you. Whoever said you went wrong!