(a) 35(Love/Passion) What Do I Cherish More Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 35(Love/Passion) What Do I Cherish More

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Your kiss, your gaze or your breath
What do I cherish more?
Your breath that I breathed
Suffusing me to the core
Sanctifying me.....
Have kept it inside safely stored
Every breath that I breathe
Intermingles with it and roars
Ecstatic in its union
Electrifying me....
Keeping me alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 December 2006

T.O.>>>SMOOTH, SENSUAL DECORUM FINELY CINSTRUCTED, HERE..YOU CONTINUE TO IMPRESS, WITH YOUR ROMANTIC STYLE OF VERSE... FRANK

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Arti Chopra 09 December 2006

electrifying in its simplicity to say the least...lovely arti

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Preeti - is here! 21 December 2006

it's sensuous and romantic! Superb!

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Geoff Warden 18 December 2006

Cherish the breath of these words....the gaze of flow of placement an' the kiss of the praise of the people whom have come to enjoy such a well established poetess.........

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Catastrophe King 12 December 2006

There have been no kisses, no gazes and no breaths; yet there are those thoughts of fulfillment and a sense of cherishment.... within those WORDS that you have written... there has been passion, there has been excitement.... in everything that you have written! Your limericks are electric, they shake the soul and churn responses from every pore! ..................... keep giving me reasons to write!

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 December 2006

oh TO, what a decision to have to make... I do not envy you in trying to pick. wonderful! -Eila

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Patricia Gale 09 December 2006

Romance at its best here T.O! A dreamy, lovely piece.

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