Awakened Poem by mandara pookal

Awakened

Rating: 3.2


Beseiged by the memories of yesterdays
Flowing thoughts spin in realms of spurts
Of joys of knowing human inconsistencies
Now augured as natural without doubt

Precious is the sanctity of soul's search
Appealing yet wholly divine
Respecting the inner desires of another
Making them blend in with one's own

Haloed spirit of mankind's own denial
Of giving unto more than receiving
Rebounding joys of perched upheavals
Rouse the truths of minds quiet destiny

In the consciousness of mirth's finesse
Wakened by the nature of sublimity
Ravaging the roughness of female pride
Unto the softness of male understanding

Explanation:

So many bitter sweet memories that linger flow and bring back the joys of realisation of faults and follies that were not understood then as natural.

The soul searches another equally divinely awakened soul and wishes to respect the desires of the other with a willingness to blend and understand the purpose and fulfilment in the self through the other.

Man is generous but refrains from realising that he gives more then he receives and gets the joys through giving and knowing the consequences will continue his search for happiness through giving and prepare for his known destiny

Man is conscious of his joys and subtle desires which are touched by the purity of another in thought, words and action though sublime but reaches the goal of softening the female pride through the softer understanding of the male who cares. Finally it is love that wins the spirit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 November 2009

THOSE TWO LINES AS KESAV SIR SAYS WILL STEAL ANY MAN'S HEART...A BEAUTIFUL POEM

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Vinod Ak 17 November 2009

splendid verses! analogous to the divine confluence of shiva & shakti!

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Vinod Ak 17 November 2009

splendid verses! analogous to the divine confluence of shiva & shakti!

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Kesav Easwaran 08 November 2009

'Softening the female pride through the softer understanding of the male who cares. Finally it is love that wins the spirit'.... This would appeal to any male's heart...and more to mine...for valid personal reasons... A nice poem sublime in its sentiments...sober soft and sweet in its telling...in tone...in its presentation...thanks for sharing your feels Mandara...10*

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Ronn Michael Salinas 07 November 2009

sensual. but pardon me if i don't really get this poem.

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