Clever Poem by mandara pookal

Clever

Rating: 3.3


She walks the ramp her heart in mouth
She's sure her move will leave no doubt
In reason logic and in mind
A trail of clues she leaves behind

Her thoughts are firm and find an edge
Though quick and sure she sits on ledge
Of mystery findings beaming new
She lets her find unravel the clue

The door is open she need not knock
The ramp her stage no need for shock
No hindrance felt in the other's whim
Walk in, exchange the ideas trim

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 09 December 2009

A well composed poem by Mandara pookal.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 December 2009

Great thoughts. Well penned Nice poem with meaningful expression Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 28 November 2009

an open door you leave...very 'clever' 'moves' Mandara...liked your words a lot...expressive impressive piece...10...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 November 2009

clever...a thought sure of itself should express itself...catering to others whims does not take us far...a lovely thought in action

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