Autumn Mist Poem by Kathy Van Kurin
Autumn Mist
autumn mist, cool drops of fine moisture- within mystery's
curtain; natural is this beauty.
Precious charms now here as God brings forth nature's
loveliness awakening our hearts to him.
Glimpses vivid- orange, yellow, cream, crimson.
Wood's grove bearing traces, the memory of summer's sunshine
as sprightly coolness saunters in.
Shorter each day descending but fall is still our
clue for its beauty hides in mystery like the lessons
of life yet unseen
Kathy Van Kurin 2016 December
I wish you had used punctuation. The poem would have read better that way. That last stanza does need a dose of punctuation. The meaning is somewhat unclear. You do have a talent for writing poetry.
Tomas Prato, It is good to know that we all are learning. Your input is received and I will keep learning for you have challenged me. Thanks for taking some time to read a poem of mine. Blessings to you in your writing this December. Kathy
Precious charms now here and God brings forth His loveliness to awaken our hearts to Him. True words, also a lovey poem and photo! Thanks for sharing, Kathy!
Thankyou Clarence Prince, I hope this line finds you well and learning all God has for you. Thank you for a great review, it was heland encouraging. Nature does teach us much! Many blessings to you. katyy
Clarence Prince, Where do we find inspiration? I think that God knows we need it and allows us to hear His voice through the masterpiece of His handiwork of the heavens and earth. We are fit to do so I think. You are good to give me your input on anything I may set my pen too. It is a vulnerable world we live in and any positivity means so much. God bless you this special Christmas season. Kathy
Oh! ! ! Kathy, Love The Way This Poem Dances Across The Reader Mind! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painting! ! ! ! ! Love The Autumn Mist! ! ! ! ! Many Tens! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Adding To Favorites ! ! ! ! !
Rebecca Navarre, Will we ever run out of delights to ponder within our wonderful natural world? I still am in awe and hope it never grows old. How can it? Your review is so kind and helpful.It is always nice to know that our poems our read and liked even a little by others; don't you think? Well, I wish you every blessing of this CHRIST-mas season! Kathy
Your poem paints beautiful colors of Autumn and I am in awe of this wonderful painting.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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fall is still our clue for its beauty hides in mystery like the lessons of life yet unseen- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I have to say I like how those lines swirled around and around like a leaf spiraling down from a tree..... you haven't written lately- -I hope all is well with you and I want you to know that I've read most of your poems and I am a very voracious reader and I want more of your poems! ! ! I would like you to take me along for another walk through your city streets- - your technique totally shines
Susan Williams, Thanks so much for your kind efforts and words to read and comment on this poem. I havn't been here in awhile. It is funny though that when someone such as yourself responds as you have the encouragement is really lovely. Guess I feel a little more motivated. Funny how seeing something through another's eyes in your above review has inspired me! Thank you, thank you, thank you!