Autumn Poem by Kwai Chee Low

Autumn



Autumn breeze soft and cool,
descending from the mountains,
whistling through trees and dales.
Leaves of red and gold,
shiver and fall.

Autumn flows in the lakes,
and wavelets ripple the surface,
in tune with the autumn wind.
White swans dance in pairs,
without a care.

Lazily I soaked in autumn's coming,
and the wetness of the misty rain.
The earth soft under my feet,
a lingering warmth since dawn,
of a summer now gone.

Friday, September 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 22 January 2016

Autumn is a poetic season. I liked your theme, beautiful.

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Kwai Chee Low 22 January 2016

Thank you, Cigeng. I love those autumn days that I spent holidaying in Melbourne several years ago. The aair was bracing and cool with beautiful mornings at 3 degrees.

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David Wood 11 September 2015

A delightful autumnal poem with good imagery. Good ink.

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Kwai Chee Low 11 September 2015

Thank you, David. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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